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about the new policy of calling all the customers in order to approve their car loans.
To commence with, when we start our shift, there is already a lot of paperwork for us to do. We have to verify income, make sure that the applicants have Correct your spelling
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license and insurance card Correct article usage
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we now have to call the customers as well.
The major issue that arises Add a comma
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new policy is that we are being yelled Linking Words
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by the applicants, that why Change preposition
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calling them to verify something that they have already talked about. Correct word order
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Secondly
, we all know that we have to give Linking Words
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on the loan application within 7 days, which is becoming harder, as the people do not answer our calls or hang up thinking us to be Correct your spelling
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.
I really believe that the best solution to Use the right word
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issue is segregating the accounts that Linking Words
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the time frame to approve or deny a loan should be increased from 7 days to 10 days. There should be a Add a comma
Also,
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team assigned to make these phone calls, so that there is no excessive Correct your spelling
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on the regular agents.
I hope you will consider my suggestions and replyUse the right word
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.
Yours sincerely
Himani JaggiRephrase
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