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Band 4

The table below shows the distribution of the students at UK universities by mode of study and gender.

Comparing the two tables, it can clearly be seen that the number of
the
Correct article usage
apply
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students
in
Change preposition
of
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 both
gender
Fix the agreement mistake
genders
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 in
part-time
Correct article usage
the part-time
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mode
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 is higher than full-time
mode
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. Meanwhile, based on enrollment figures, interest level among male and female students constantly increased in full-time
mode
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 from 1996 to the end of the period,
while
Linking Words
 in
part time
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part-time
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mode
Punctuation problem
mode,
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 things were different.

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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words mode with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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