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the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particulat carribean island between 2010 and 2017. summarise the informattion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particulat carribean island between 2010 and 2017. summarise the informattion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The line graph compares the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean
island
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 between 2010 and 2017, divided into those who stayed on
cruise
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 ships and those who stayed on the
island
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.
Overall
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, the total number of
visitors
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 to the
island
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 rose steadily over the period, almost tripling by 2017.
While
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 tourists staying on the
island
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 outnumbered
cruise
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ship
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 passengers at the start, the reverse was true by the end of the period.
Cruise
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ship
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visitors
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 showed the most dramatic growth after 2013. In 2010, the
island
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 was visited by 1
million
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 tourists in total, with 0.7
million
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 staying on the
island
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 and 0.3
million
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 on
cruise
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 ships. By 2013, the number of
visitors
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 on the
island
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 had more than doubled to around 1.5
million
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, before stabilising for two years, falling slightly in 2016, and
then
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 recovering to 1.5
million
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 in 2017.
By contrast
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,
cruise
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ship
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visitors
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 saw modest growth from 0.3
million
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 in 2010 to 0.5
million
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 in 2011, followed by a small drop in 2012. From 2013 onwards, their numbers increased sharply, reaching 2
million
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 by 2017.
As a result
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,
cruise
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ship
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 passengers overtook
island
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visitors
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 in the final year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, cruise, visitors, ship, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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