the line graph showsthe number of immigrantsto 3 different countries USA, CANADA, AUSTRALIA from 1991 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the line graph showsthe number of immigrantsto 3 different countries USA, CANADA, AUSTRALIA from 1991 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the line graph showsthe number of immigrantsto 3 different countries USA, CANADA, AUSTRALIA from 1991 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Introduction The diagram compares the
quantity
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number
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of
immigrants
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to the
USA
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, Canada, and
Australia
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between 1991 and 2001.
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Australia
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had the highest number of
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at the beginning of the period,
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figure
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declined sharply over time.
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, the
USA
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saw a steady increase,
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Canada’s numbers fluctuated. Body 1 In 1991, Canada received approximately 500
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, which was considerably fewer than in the
USA
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and
Australia
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at that time and the lowest
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among the three countries.
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showed a gradual and consistent upward trend over the following four years, reaching a peak of around 2,400 in 1995, before dropping sharply to about 1,000 in 1996. It
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remained stable for several years before increasing to roughly 1,600 by 2001. Body 2 As for the
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, the number of foreign
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was 1,100 in 1991 and grew steadily to 2,500 in 2001.
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,
Australia
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attracted the most
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in 1991, at around 2,800.
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,
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figure
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fell significantly to 500 by 1995 and remained stable at that level until 2001.

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