The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The photo
provide
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provides
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a clear view
about
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of
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the
procuse
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process
of turning the bamboo plant into cloth in nine clear steps .
Over all
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, it is
apprent
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apparent
that
the
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apply
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making bamboo fabric is a long
procuse
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process
. That
help
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helps
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understanding the trend and how things change . 
Farst
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First
of all , planting enoph bamboo plants . After that , farmers cut it
dowen
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down
. The
thered
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third
step is
bouting
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bout
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it in the
mashien
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machine
to cut it into long strips.
Also
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, it
need
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needs
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to be crushed to make liquid pulp . Next , filtering is
a
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an
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important step to separate long
fibers
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fibres
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from liquid . They soften fibres by adding water and amine oxide . In steps
number
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apply
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7 and 8
the
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, the
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soften
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softened
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fibre
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is spin
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spin
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spun
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to make yam  and
weave
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woven
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into fabric ready to use .
At the end
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,
this
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fabric changed to the  
pess
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piece
of clothes you need like
sherts
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shirts
.

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