The line graph below shows the unemployment rates in three countries between 1993 and 2007.

The chart compares three developed countries (the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan)

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in terms

of how many people without work in these

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between 1993 and 2007.

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, the three regions

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have

different

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rates

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of

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unemployment

in the time period.

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the

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of

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unemployed

to

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the rest of Europe and Japan rose with some fluctuations, the

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the UK fell over time. As the

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shows, about 11

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of people

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in the UK in 1993.

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, decreased considerably more than 5

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from 1994 to 2001. The

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of

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remained

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unchanged

at around 4 until 2005, but after,

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rose

slightly to 5

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in 2007. The line

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shows more than 9

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of people unemployed in the rest of Europe in 1993.

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decreased slowly to 10

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from 1995 to 1999.

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, the

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dropped sharply to 8

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in 2001,

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it remained

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in 2002 and 2005. In

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the

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of unemployed declined to 5. In

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japan

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unemployment

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2

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in 1993.

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,

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rose

slowly till 2003.

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,

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increased from 2004 to 2007.