The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the two routes to access a
city
Use synonyms
hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, the buildings are divided into a
city
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hospital, a public car park, staff parking, and a
bus
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station. Roads are spread throughout the
city
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and ring around a building.
To begin
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with, in 2007, the staff and customers needed to park their cars in the same place beside the
bus
Use synonyms
stop. Over the
year
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years
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, that location was replaced for only employees, and others needed to park on the right side of the map.
Moreover
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, the
bus
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stop had disappeared and was replaced by the
bus
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station on the left part of the map.
Nevertheless
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, in 2010, each intersection had added a roundabout in the
city
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and
the
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on the
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ring. These roundabouts were connected to the
bus
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station.
As a result
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, the entrance of
this
Linking Words
medical building had two ways, which were the bottom and the right side
of
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apply
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it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • infrastructure
  • modifications
  • traffic flow
  • arterial road
  • roundabout
  • one-way system
  • pedestrian paths
  • public transportation
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • bypass
  • congestion
  • diverted traffic
  • upgraded facilities
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