In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this

In our contemporary world, we witness the burst of population, and it is crystal clear that

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large number of people

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somewhere to live; in

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regard, one of the possible options is to construct residential areas in the

countryside

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, some individuals opine that saving

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places has a higher priority than building houses in them. I disagree with

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notion for two reasons, which I am going to elucidate in the following paragraphs. Beyond the shadow of a doubt, residents and people of a city need accommodations to live in

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otherwise

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they will leave, and by doing

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, the economy of that area is threatened.

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, Ahvaz is an industrialised metropolis in Iran, which accommodates a high number of companies and industries, and

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reason, it has an enriched economic situation. Two years ago, Ahvaz authorities wanted to build some residential areas in the city’s suburbs in order to absorb more workers from other towns to boost the financial situation, but Ahvaz inhabitants were totally disagreeing with that decision;

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, the government could not construct anything and after just one year, that area faced a noticeable decline regarding its economic situation.

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, as individuals are considered

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the workforce for a city, it is highly reasonable to consider somewhere to accommodate them, even in the

countryside

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, building outside the cities can be beneficial in

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a way that two birds can be killed by one stone through

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action; authorities can both accommodate their people and,

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preserve natural reserves and

countryside

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around cities.

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, in Switzerland, a high number of buildings and constructions can be seen built in the towns’ surroundings and landscapes. Simultaneously, these buildings did not harm the environment since they were constructed based on some regulations to preserve

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nature as well.

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, construction inside the

countrysides

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does not mean that these areas will

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or be destroyed completely.

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, regarding the demand for building houses in the

countryside

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, and the notion that

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action can be harmful and should be avoided, I have maintained my reasons in detail to support the viewpoint of building homes in

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places.