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It is often said that exams are a poor way of evaluating students’ ability, and that they cause a great deal of unnecessary stress. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

In recent years, some people think that
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 are not a good way to
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assess
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student’s
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ability
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, and they can cause
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great pressure on
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.From my perspective, I totally agree with
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 standpoint.
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 with,
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 have clear limits in evaluating
ability
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. To elaborate, the majority of
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 focus on testing what
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 remember,
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 as formulas , ancient poetry and so on,but
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 hardly
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paratical
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practical
 skills.
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, a science exam may ask
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 to write down a
theroy
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theory
, but it cannot show if they can use the theory to solve a real problem.
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 cooperation
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, critical thinking
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, like these are all play an important role, not only
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 goals.
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,
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 often bring a big quality of
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. Indeed, there are high risks in some
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, like graduation
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, entrance
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 ,
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exams
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.
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 to say,
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 can create some
protential
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potential
stress
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 when
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 are preparing for
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.Because these outcomes may affect college admissions or academic progress,
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anxiety.
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 may experience sleepless nights,loss of appetite, and even collapse.
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stress
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 not only harms their mental health, but
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obstructed
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 the student’s learning,as they are worried that they will fail , which
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 their anxiety. In conclusion,
exams
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 are indeed a flawed method of
accessing
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students
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.To gain
more
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a more
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 comprehensive understanding of
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ability
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abilities
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 and reduce
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, schools or teachers should choose alternative assignment methods
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such
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, such
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 as projects
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 will require
students
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’ comprehensive abilities and allow teachers to better evaluate the
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.

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grammar
Fix spelling and grammar. For example, 'accessing' should be 'assessing', 'paratical' should be 'practical', and 'loss' should have a space: 'loss of appetite'.
structure
In the intro, state your view clearly and add a short plan. In the body, give 2–3 main ideas with a simple example for each.
coherence
Make the link between ideas clearer. Start each paragraph with a topic sentence and use simple linking words to show how ideas connect.
lexical
Use common words correctly and avoid long phrases. Build a small range of useful, everyday academic words and stick to them.
content
The essay shows a clear view and has a final conclusion that restates the view.
content
Some specific examples of exams (graduation, entrance, final exams) are used to support points.
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