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Band 2

In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is, therefore, logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is no denying the fact that family and male
essetial
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essential
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 it is a commonly held belief that in
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, femaly
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femaly
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female
 and male work
all time
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is always
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 logical for women and men to share household tasks, there is
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 an argument that opposes it. In my opinion , l consider that husband and wife
equal
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are equal
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 for
any think
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 in the world.
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 family
in
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is
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 equal
women
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for women
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 and men.
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, if
haspent
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husband
 and wife work together to make
big
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a big
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 and strong family.
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,
women
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women's
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 success in the Fields
education
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of education
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. This
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this
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 guide She has the ability as a man.
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family
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the family
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 have 5 sen with haspent and
wife
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a wife
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the
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 parents work in seem campne so there have more
mony
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money
 you can send kids to school or travel.
sharing
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Sharing
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 tasks and responsibilities can help
a
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reduce a
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little stress. In conclusion, despite people having different views,
l
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I
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 believe that
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it
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 is important to divide the tasks between the spouses and treat them equally.

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task response
State your view clearly at the start. Tell if you agree or not.
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Give two simple reasons for your view.
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Give a short, easy example for each reason.
coherence
Make each idea in one paragraph and use clear links like first, also, but, so.
grammar
Check grammar and spelling; keep form simple and words short.
idea
Clear idea that both partners should share duties.
structure
Conclusion states equality.
coherence
Some linking words used.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • share
  • split
  • housework
  • chores
  • full-time
  • fair
  • equal
  • partner
  • man
  • woman
  • time
  • plan
  • discuss
  • schedule
  • divide
  • care
  • children
  • family
  • help
  • support
  • work
  • job
  • money
  • stress
  • mood
  • life
  • habit
  • idea
  • culture
  • rule
  • change
  • possible
  • better
  • skill
  • prefer
  • balance
  • day
  • week
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