The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts indicate the
percentage
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of
water
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consumption for different aims in some continents
in
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on
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the
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Earth.
Overall
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, North
America
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and
Europe
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use the
biggest
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largest
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percentage
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of
water
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in industrial
area
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areas
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.
In contrast
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, agricultural usage of
water
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has the biggest segment in South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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, and
South East
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Southeast
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Asia
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. In Central
Asia
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,
water
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consumption shows the vast majority,
in addition
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Africa
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to Africa
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, South East
Asia
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, and South
America
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follows
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Central
Asia
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with 84%, 81%, and 71%, respectively.
While
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usage in houses has the same slice in Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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, it is the second biggest pie in South
America
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. The
percentage
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of
water
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used for industry in South
America
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is one in ten
and
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, and
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in South East
Asia
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just over 10%.
Furthermore
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, Africa and Central
Asia
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are countries which use a few
water
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in industry
with
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, with
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7% and one in twenty, respectively. The
percentage
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of
water
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used for industry in
Europe
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is more than half
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in
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; in
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addition
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addition,
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in North
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America
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America,
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it is 48%. Domestic usage has the smallest section
both
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in both
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North
America
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and
Europe
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and
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, and
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it is 13% and less than a fifth, respectively. The
percentage
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of
water
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used for agriculture in North
America
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and
Europe
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are
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is
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almost the same
but
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, but
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North
America
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has the bigger pie than
Europe
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and
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, and
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it is just under two-fifths.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, water, america, europe, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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