The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity.

The picture illustrates the process by which electricity is produced at a hydroelectric power station by using water.

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, it can be seen that the process involves eight steps, from heating by natural resources to delivering the energy to domestic and industrial consumers. The process begins with seawater they had been subjected to intense heat and evaporates form to the small few clouds in the sky.

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they turned into a one storm cloud that rained over the mountains.

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, the pipes are connected to reservoirs from two sides , which are located behind the dam , and when the valve is open, the water is generated by the turbine and flows through the

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, the electricity produced by the turbine is transferred to the transformer station by high-voltage cables. The final stage is that electricity is delivered through underground cables to residential and industrial-scale areas ,

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to educational and medical facilities.

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