The two paragraphs illustrate how the city hospital changed from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
,the main part of the city hospital Linking Words
alomst
had not changed, Correct your spelling
almost
whereas
the Hospital Linking Words
RD
, the Car Use synonyms
Park
and some other parts had changed a lot.
The most important change must be the transportation. Use synonyms
Linking Words
FIrstly
, the crossroad of the Ring Road and the Hospital Fix capitalization
Firstly
Use synonyms
RD
in 2007 Check wording
Road
had been
changed to a roundabout in 2010, Wrong verb form
was
so
Change preposition
apply
as
the crossroad between the City Road and the Hospital Correct word choice
and
RD
. Use synonyms
Also
in 2010 , a bus station Linking Words
had been
established to the west of the Hospital Wrong verb form
was
Use synonyms
RD
,which linked the two roundabouts. Check wording
Road
This
had replaced the 6 Bus stops on the side of the Hospital Linking Words
Use synonyms
RD
in 2007.
Meanwhile, the car parks had Check wording
Road
also
been reformed in 2010. In 2007, there was only 1 Car Linking Words
park
on the east side of the Hospital Use synonyms
Use synonyms
RD
, Check wording
Road
while
Linking Words
this
number had become 2 in 2010. The 2 parks had been divided for function. In 2007, the Linking Words
park
was both for the staff Use synonyms
an
the public, Use the right word
and
whereas
there was 1 Linking Words
park
for the staff( the Use synonyms
park
of the past ) and 1 Use synonyms
park
for the public( on the east side of the hospital ).Use synonyms