The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
These two maps show the variation
about
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in
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the development of the
city
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hospital between 2007 and 2010. In 2007, there were not many buildings near the
city
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hospital
and
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, and
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it was surrounded by the Ring
Road
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The
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. The
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Hospital
Road
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connected the
City
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Road
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and the Ring
Road
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with 6 bus stops along it .Beside the Hospital
Road
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was the car park
which
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, which
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was for
staffs
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staff
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and
public
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the public
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with
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, with
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the gate opened to the north. Until 2010, many structures had been changed. Two roundabouts were added
on
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at
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the
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apply
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both ends of the Hospital
Road
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.6 bus stops were replaced by a big one and the new bus station was
connect
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connected
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to the two roundabouts without staying along the Hospital
Road
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.
Original
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car park was
exchanged
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replaced
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by one only
opened
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open
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to
staffs
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staff
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and
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, and
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a new car park for
public
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the public
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was built
at
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to
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the east of the
city
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hospital
with
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, with
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the entrance
faced
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facing
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the Ring
Road
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.

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Linking words: Add linking words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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