The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The two maps depict the layout of
road
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access to the city hospital and items around it in 2007 and how it had changed by 2010.
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,
road
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access underwent significant
modernization
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over the 3-year period, with the most notable changes being the expansion of areas in the east and the south of the hospital. In 2007,
road
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access and items around the hospital were quite simple.The hospital was surrounded by Ring
Road
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and
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there was a Hospital
Road
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in the
southern
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of the hospital with a City
Road
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went
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that went
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through it
,
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.
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Beside the Hospital
Road
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were trees and to its east
there
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, there
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was a
car
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park
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for both staff and public.In the east of
hospital
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the hospital
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, there is a Bus stop. By 2010, dramatic changes had taken place.To the west of the Hospital
Road
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,a new bus station was built
and
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to its east, the original
car
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park
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was changed for staff use only.
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,in the east of the hospital, a new public
car
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park
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had been added.Notably,to the east of the staff
car
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park
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, there was a new roundabout.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, car, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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