The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The two maps illustrate the changes
of
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road access to a
city
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hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, the
City
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Hospital has undergone a significant transformation, with the
car
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park
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being divided into two sections: one for staff and one for the public. What's more, some new transportation facilities have been added. In 2007,
City
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Hospital was surrounded by Ring Road,
witn
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with
Hospital Road being located
sorth
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south
of the
City
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Hospital. A single
car
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park
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was located to the east of the hospital building, serving staff and public visitors. There were no public transport facilities
this
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year. In 2010,
City
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Hospital converted into a more convenient place, both for
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car
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the car
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park
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and for transportation. The hospital building remained in the same position.
However
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, the previous
car
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park
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was now replaced by a Staff
car
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park
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, and the Public
car
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park
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, which is the other part of the original
Car
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park
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, was built
on
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the east of the
City
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Hospital. A new bus station was linked to Hospital RD,
that
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which
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could make the
transports
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transport
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more efficient.
Furthermore
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, some
roundabout
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roundabouts
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were
alse
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also
added to the crossing.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, car, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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