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Some people prefer working from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

It is often argued that working from home has more benefits than working in person, and
this
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views
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. One of the most obvious advantages of working remotely is the flexibility of working hours, and you are
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responsible
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 your own tasks.
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 the increased amount of quality
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time since it is there are no trips to
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 and coming back
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,
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 could raise the outputs of the employees significantly.
On the other hand
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, some of the majors are impossible to
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, Doctors, Engineers, and every other
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profession
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 that
require
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a
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physical attendance.
However
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, there are some disadvantages
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 could
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, there might be some miscommunication
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lack
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 of face-to-face contact, or for some others, it reduces their productivity to
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 from home more. In conclusion, there are strong points to both sides.
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, there are great practices in some of the companies in
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 matter. They give the employees any day of the week to
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 remotely
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 chosen by the employees themselves

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structure
Make your main view clear in the intro and restate it at the end.
coherence
Put one clear idea in each paragraph. Start with a simple sentence about the idea, then add a short explain.
content
Add more real examples or facts to back up each point.
grammar
Fix grammar errors like 'you are the responsible of your own tasks' to 'you are responsible for your own tasks'.
style
Use short, plain sentences. Avoid long strings of ideas in one sentence.
content
You discuss both sides of the topic.
structure
There is an ending paragraph that sums up.
coherence
Link words show contrast and add ideas.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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