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The supplied diagram illustrates the process

about

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of

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how bricks

manufactured

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are manufactured

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for the building industry.

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, it can be clearly seen that

this

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is a manufacturing process

,

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that includes seven

various

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stages of production

bricks

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of bricks

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. Starting with extracting clay and ending delivery of the finished product. At

first,

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extracting clay by digger and

sift

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sifting

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it all on a metal grid.

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, put it on

roller

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the roller

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, by adding sand and water, we have two ways of

doing

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making

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bricks.

First

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The first

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way to fill out the mould with ready mass or the second way by wire cutter. After that, let it dry in a

driving

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drying

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oven for 24-48 hours. Following that, have 3 steps of kilning it, first of

all

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all,

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moderate to

200’C-980’C

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200 °C-980 °C

,

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subsequently

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subsequent

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subsequent,

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high mode is

870’C-1300’C

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870 °C-1300 °C

. After

,

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apply

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putting it in a cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. At

last

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, packaging

end-product

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the end-product

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and as soon as it is ready,

delivery

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delivering

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it

for

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to

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the building industry.