Write a letter to the manager. Write about your feelings and what you think the club management should do about the situation. Write about 120-150 words.
Dear Manager,
Thank you for your email. I understand
that
fitness club must close for one month.
It is good that it will repair the building and
put new equipment, but I feel a little bit sad because I like to go there every week. I think maybe you can make some outdoor
training or online lessons when a club is
closed. Fix capitalization
That
This
can help members continue
sport and not stop. And, I hope you can change some things in the club. The shower sometimes Linking Words
not
work Verb problem
does not
good
. Maybe Change the adjective
well
also
put more glasses and lights in Linking Words
training
area.Thank you for Correct article usage
the training
listen
to our opinion. I hope everything Wrong verb form
listening
go
well and we can come back soon
With the best wishes Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
Mirziyod
Punctuation problem
, Mirziyod
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structure
Use two or three short parts. Start with hello, give your main idea, then a few more points, and end with a kind closing.
coherence
Make ideas link with simple words like and, also, but. Use one idea per short part and put them in order.
grammar
Fix small errors in gram: 'the club must close', 'Thank you for listening', 'does not work well'.
content
You show care for the club and its people.
tone
You keep a kind tone and end with good wishes.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.