Write a letter to the manager. Write about your feelings and what you think the club management should do about the situation. Write about 120-150 words.

Dear Manager, Thank you for your email. I understand
that
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fitness club must close for one month. It is good that it will repair the building and put new equipment, but I feel a little bit sad because I like to go there every week. I think maybe you can make some outdoor training or online lessons when a club is closed.
This
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can help members continue sport and not stop. And, I hope you can change some things in the club. The shower sometimes
not
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does not
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work
good
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. Maybe
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put more glasses and lights in
training
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the training
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area.Thank you for
listen
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to our opinion. I hope everything
go
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well and we can come back soon With the best wishes
Mirziyod
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, Mirziyod
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structure
Use two or three short parts. Start with hello, give your main idea, then a few more points, and end with a kind closing.
coherence
Make ideas link with simple words like and, also, but. Use one idea per short part and put them in order.
grammar
Fix small errors in gram: 'the club must close', 'Thank you for listening', 'does not work well'.
content
You show care for the club and its people.
tone
You keep a kind tone and end with good wishes.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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