The two charts below show the living arrangements of two different age groups in a certain country in 2015.

The two charts provide data regarding the living

arrangement

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of citizens aged between 25 to 34 and 35 to 44 in a particular country in 2015.

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it is clear that

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most people from the younger group lived with parents or flatmates. It is

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evident

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that in the older group, significantly more people shared their housing with their partner or spouse. Focusing first on the younger citizens, the proportions of those living with their mothers and fathers or with flatmates were approximately the same, around 35%. Notably, the percentages of 25-34-year-olds living by themselves or with

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also were

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very similar, more than one in ten. Turning to the older group, just under half of these citizens lived with

partner

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a partner

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or spouse, making

this

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proportion significantly higher than that of those living with parents, at roughly 10 to 12%. Regarding the remaining two groups, their proportions were almost equal, between about 18% and 22%.

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