Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email •Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn •Explain how your friend could learn this sport •Suggest that you both learn this sport together

Dear David, Hello, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you to give you some advice about learning a new sport. I recommend that you learn how to play badminton for two reasons.
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you are an agile individual, and you have remarkable physical fitness.
Second,
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you like to amuse yourself playing indoor activities.
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, I think badminton highly suits your physical features and your tendencies. If you want to learn
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sport,
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you need to pay a visit to your local badminton club, which is located in the vicinity of your neighbourhood.
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, you must fill in some forms about your health status and the reasons why you chose
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kind of spot.
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, they can allocate you a personal coach for a reasonable amount of money to hire. We can start learning together from
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month if you like. Since I like racket sports very much, we can go together and hire a trainer for both of us.
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action would be highly beneficial as we can exercise together and create a new hobby for ourselves.
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, we would pay less amount of money for group training
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of having two personal trainers. I am highly thankful that you asked me for advice. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible on
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matter. Best wishes, Your intimate friend.

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task response
The email picks badminton and gives reasons, a way to learn it, and a plan to learn together. To improve, add more concrete steps for the learner, like exact places to go, what to bring, how long to train, and a simple plan.
coherence cohesion
Use simple link words to guide the reader, such as 'First', 'Then', 'Next', 'Finally'. Shorter sentences help clarity.
strength
Clear purpose and friendly tone for a friend.
strength
Good idea to learn together and to save money by group or joint coaching.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • suitable
  • facilities
  • physical capabilities
  • interests
  • local club
  • hiring a coach
  • online resources
  • practice sessions
  • motivating
  • attending classes
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