The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996,2006,2016.

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of native speakers of various languages by percentage at

bakersfield senior college

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Bakersfield Senior College

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1980 and 1990.

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english

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had the biggest share

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all other native languages and

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decrease over time,

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urdue

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Urdu

had the second place and shows a significant increase over the next decade. in 20

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

59 words

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The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996,2006,2016.

rapid rise of artificial intelligence (AI) in various industries is leading to job displacement and unemployment for many workers. What are the reasons for this trend? What solutions can be implemented by the government to address these issues?

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Both government and individual are spending vast amount of money protecting animals and their habitats. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and healthcare. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You have a spare room in your Apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to your Student Accommodation Officer of local college and say 1. Where is your apartment located? 2. When will the room be available 3. What are the requirements for a student to stay?

You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take