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The chart bellow shows the percentage ofdifferent types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002

The chart bellow shows the percentage ofdifferent types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002
The bar chart provides information about how much trash (plastic, cans, paper, glass)
were
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 recycled by one town from 1992 to 2002.
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, figures for all types of waste experienced growth over the years, but with some stagnation and fluctuation periods. As the graph shows, recycling of plastic was 10% in 1992,
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 it went up to around 12% in 1997 and remained
the
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stable till 2002. Obviously, under 20% of cans
was
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were
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 recycled in 1992
and
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, and
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 next five years
it
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, it
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decline
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declined
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 to
aproximetly
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approximately
 15%. After
that
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that,
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 there was a sharp increase to more than 23% in 2002.
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, the rapid rise accounted for paper reusing, which started at about 15% in 1992 and reached 30% and 40% in 1997 and 2002,
respectevly
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respectively
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Figure
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 for glass recycling began at around 15%,
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 experienced
big
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a big
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 growth to just under 30% in 1997.
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Finally
Finnaly
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Finnaly,
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 it reached
Just
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 above 50% in 2002.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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