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people
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their Change preposition
on is
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consumption
behavior
. Nowadays, there are several beliefs about how to reduce obesity Use the right word
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people
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restriction
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apply
people
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health
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the longterm
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long term
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fruit
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then
after she got sick and went to the hospital. Unfortunately, she passed away within a couple Linking Words
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malnutrition
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especially
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, local medicine or DIY Linking Words
supplement
or skincare to heal skin problems could lead to other Fix the agreement mistake
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health
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handmade
medicines or skincare products have not been approved by Correct article usage
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thus
consumers would not know whether those medicines or personal care products contain any contaminants or Rephrase
apply
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chemicals
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to obtain
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improper
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chemicals
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, together
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scientist
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scientists
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doctors. Replace the word
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people
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believe
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who believe
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treatment
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health
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symptoms
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migraine
headache
, blood flow, and digestion. When those Fix the agreement mistake
headaches
people
know about the Use synonyms
possitive
effects of that Correct your spelling
positive
treatment
, they would like to have Use synonyms
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treatment
without concern about their safety. Correct article usage
the treatment
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, if they visit herbal burning that have to perform Linking Words
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a fire
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in loss of life.
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should have been approved by Correct your spelling
treatment
specialist
first to prevent any drawback circumstances and if Correct article usage
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remain
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remains
its
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apply
health
issues would become rising and create more cases for Use synonyms
doctor
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doctors
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problems
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