Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a “level playing field” that reduces socio economic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather that their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students’ rights to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academics achievement. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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that school dress code is an

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accelerator

of bringing social justice to educational environments, and

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makes pupils more focused on their education

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there are some

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on the negative sides of

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they contend that it has no

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or academic benefits.

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I strongly believe the assimilation process creates dynamics that are against their initial aims. Proponents of defining dress rules for students believe, not only

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students

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hygiene

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it makes room for them to focus on their homework and assignments

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some aspects and on

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it seems really

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pragmatic

, since they don't have any options to choose from and they must only focus on getting prepared

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that

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clothings

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families spend more money on their

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style, which creates a dynamic of power among the children.

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the families are, the more stylish their children are, so the more other students respect and draw attention,

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it makes them more confident, which

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reflects on their studies.

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,

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measures

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the

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potential

for individuals to express their

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identity

through what they wear, as most of us decide what to wear

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based

on our

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character

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example

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my niece is really interested in graphic

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, so she always gets dressed using

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patterns.

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finally

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, I can suggest that schools can choose considering a wide range of dress

code

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, in which

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all arrays of interests and all

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castes are included,

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result

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the school atmosphere becomes a dynamic place, where

every one

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considers their own well-being and can express their unique identity.