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, some specialists
as doctors and engineers are expected to work in the
where they have learned,
, other
believe that those professionals should have
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to choose wherever they want. In
essay, I will
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of
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and
provide my own view.
On the one hand, the reasons that some occupations
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medical staff or
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should perform their work within
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have been trained.
, it is true that those careers require
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by the authorities of that
. Some
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or rules may be accepted or
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in
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but not anywhere
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those workers need the
to become
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workers.
, those specialists studied with advanced technologies which are
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local
, particularly
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because the tools and technologies cost a large
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money that just private sector cannot afford, and
, it is
reasonable that some
may expect tangible return for domestic
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who pay taxes.
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that the professionals learned may
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that area because the information or researches were conducted from local
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.
, in South Africa,
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may specialise in the disease caused by
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America may not
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with
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African
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may Verb problem
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should be in Africa.
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nowadays
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believe in
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citizen is a core value more and more. No matter where they live, they can be helpful
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the benefits belong to everyone.
, some countries may offer better benefits
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than the nation that they graduated from. It is
that the specialists have to devote their time, effort or resources to
their career goal, so it is reasonable that they should have
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return
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their investment
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if there is
someCorrect determiner usage
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that could offer more, they should be free to choose
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.
, some continents are facing
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of human resources
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as in Africa and
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East.
, those nations should be prioritised because they are in more
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.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I believe that no one should be limited
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right or freedom to live
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wherever just because of some conditions.
have every right to choose where they prefer to spend their lives as professionals.