In recent years, there is some belief that if sweet
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impact
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peoples'Check wording
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become more costly, the
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decrease. In my opinion, I partly agree
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On the one hand, it is true that the number of
and beverages might be dropped as their prices are increased because demands
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goods rely on their prices. When
consider the higher
of desserts or sweet drinks and
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the
.
,
consume less
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is a major reason leading to many
problems
as obesity, cancers, and diabetes.
,
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beveragesFix the agreement mistake
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producers have to decrease
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of
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in order to manage their
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. If their
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ingredients, it will affect
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their
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of selling and it may have
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impact
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their business.
,
and drinks have
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level of
,
tend to have inevitably lower
intake and become more familiar with
low sweetCorrect word choice
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.
, consumers would choose
food more and more.
, some
still have demands for sugary
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the prices are high or remain the same. The
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reason is
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youth still have to consume
because
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that
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energy
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is significant for their growth.
, making
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expensive
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may
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other problems.
, in
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family, the kids may become easily
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of
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.
, it is undeniable that sugary
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many cultures
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as
chocolateCorrect article usage
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gift for Valentine,
birthdayCorrect article usage
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cake, or
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for
fullCorrect article usage
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moon event. So,
higherCorrect article usage
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may result in
's expenditure and still have no impact
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better
.
, several
have
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toothsCorrect subject-verb agreement
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and they need sugary
for their enjoyable life. Even though they already recognise how negative consequences to their
if they consume
, they have
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to be happy by eating
. Those reasons convince me that the
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only unnecessary for some customers, but
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an
for them.
In conclusion, I agree that raising
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in sugary
is a factor that may influent
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customersCheck wording
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decisionFix the agreement mistake
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whether they would buy the product or not.
, I do not think
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can be a panacea that can completely cure the problem because there are other
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encourageCorrect pronoun usage
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them to buy the goods
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childrenCheck wording
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needs, their culture and their personal preferences.