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The table shows the changes in modes of travel in a European country between 1995 and 2025. It also shows a projection to the year 2015.

The table shows the changes in modes of travel in a European country between 1995 and 2025. It also shows a projection to the year 2015.
This
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 table presents five
tips
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modes
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 of transport
air
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: air
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, bicycle, motorbike, bus, and rail in
Europ
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Europe
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 between
three
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the
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 years 1995, 2005,
2015
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and 2015
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.
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apply
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.
In addition
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, the complete sum of these three years.
Overall
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,
We
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we
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 can see
cleartly
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clearly
 that the most
dapend
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dependent
 on modes of travel was in 2015.
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However
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However,
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 the least one was in 1995. Which
expres
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expresses
 how the number increased over
these
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this
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 period. Between 1995 and
2015
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2015,
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 the demand
on
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for
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 air and train increased 18 and 22 .
In
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On
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 the other hand, bus
discreased
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decreased
about
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by about
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 14.
Bicycle
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Bicycles
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 and
motobike
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motobikes
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 did not change a lot . The total from 1995 to 2005 increased
just
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by just
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 7, but between 2005 and 2015
inreased signifacintly
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increased significantly
20
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by 20
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. More than
the
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apply
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half.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • Transportation preferences
  • Trends and shifts
  • Technological advancements
  • Urban policies
  • Substantial increase
  • Infrastructural developments
  • Projection
  • Environmental policies
  • Technological innovations
  • Electric vehicles
  • Smart public systems
  • Shared transportation
  • Transformation trends
  • Responsiveness
  • Transport policies
  • Sustainability aspects
  • Eco-friendly commute
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