It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaurs, dodos, etc.) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that the

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of some animal

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, like dinosaurs and dodos, is a part of the environment and

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, it is unnecessary for humanity to try to tackle

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issue. Personally, I totally disagree with

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statement and believe that humanity should put an effort to prevent the

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of some

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,

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the fact that often it is human activity that causes them to die, not the natural process. Some individuals think that animal

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is a part of one of the natural processes, and it is the environment

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responsible for their

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. Natural disasters,

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as the fall of a meteor and changes in the climate, were the main reasons for the

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of many

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millions of years ago.

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, extinctions have always been a part of Earth's history , and the

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of some kinds would result in the development of dozens of

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.

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, some claim that it is impossible for people to try to prevent and somehow stop the disappearance of some types of

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. Others,

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, argue that human activity is the reason for the current loss of the

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. Deforestation, pollution and climate change have negatively influenced the lives of some

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and increased the

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rates far beyond the natural levels.

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, the habitats of some

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have been rapidly destroyed by individuals;

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,

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do not have time to adapt to harsh environments, which in turn results in their disappearance. Since humans are responsible for all of these, it is their obligation to protect the environment and reduce the harm. In conclusion,

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the loss of some types of

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can be seen as a natural evolution, I strongly disagree with

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view , as it is obvious that the actions of humans are the main threat to

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, people should try to protect endangered

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whenever possible.