In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, consumers see more frequently goods or services
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advertisements
because many business present their
production
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products
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in new channels or new ways. In my opinion, I think that
this
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is a positive marketing
developmet
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development
. On the one hand, there are many channels to promote their goods or services
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such
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as social media and
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people nowadays are able to
acknowlege
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acknowledge
those
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inclusively.
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, more information would be noticed by the whole country
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, even
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overseas
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, not
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only in city
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, but
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countrysides
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countryside
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.
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, those
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advertisements
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can be shown in more areas
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as
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, advertising on cars or buses'
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exterior
, displaying LED presentation onto
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skyscrapers
as
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the development of technologies.
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, more and more ownership of those
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subjects
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could earn more income from
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the rental
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fee.
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, reduction of printed
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brochures
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or showing in
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newspapers
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will lead to
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a positive
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effect
to
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on
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our environment since
business
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businesses
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trend
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to avoid conventional ways to promote their
prodocts
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products
as
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reducing the use
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of
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physical paper.
On the other hand
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, it creates difficulties for parents because some
production
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productions
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which may not be suitable for kids would be noticed by them
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, and
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this
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could lead to several problems.
For instance
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, teenagers are convinced to consume
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alcoholic
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beverages
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by ads and try to experience
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alcoholic
drink
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drinks
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even though it causes
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a negative
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impact
to
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on
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their health.
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, seeing several
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products'
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promotion more frequently could cause frustration
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, which
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result
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results
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in mental health
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issues.
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When people have seen something over and over time
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,
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creates
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bordomness
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boredom
because they may be
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interrupted
during
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while
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doing
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an
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activity. In conclusion, even though
,
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apply
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the advertisement will be either noted by children or
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presented
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too much, there is
new
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a new
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function of new technologies or
feature
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a feature
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to turn off those ads.
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, the benefits from less waste and equality are much more essential, so I believe that the advantages outweigh
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the disadvantages
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.

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task
Be clear about your view in the first sentence and keep to it. Do not shift to new ideas in the last part.
coherence
Use one main idea in each paragraph. Start with a small line that gives the idea.
coherence
Use linking words like also, but, however, for example to tie ideas. This helps flow.
grammar
Check spelling and use short, plain words. Short sentences are easier to read.
planning
Keep to the topic and avoid long off topic parts. Good planning helps.
content
Clear aim and clear stance are shown.
structure
Use of on the one hand and on the other hand shows structure.
content
Some examples are used to show points.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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