The pie charts below show usage share of desktop browsers in 2019 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show usage share of desktop browsers in 2019 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show usage share of desktop browsers in 2019 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the usage share of desktop
browsers
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in 2019 and 2021.
Overall
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, the most popular browser for all users for two years was Chrome with a big dominance in both times
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in contrast
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, all other
browsers
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in a summary took a little more than 30% of the pie. Looking at the details, the difference in the period of two years was not that big
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Chrome's popularity decreased from 69% to 67%. In 2019, two
browsers
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had the same percentage, namely 9% is Safari and Firefox. The edge was slightly under them , with only 5%.
Furthermore
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, the other
browsers
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were 8% in summary.
On the other hand
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, in 2021, Firefox percentages decreased by one per cent, unlike Safari
also
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changed by 1%, but increased.
Moreover
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, Edge had a big growth
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4 per cent, it went bigger than Firefox. Other
browsers
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also
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lost popularity, and their share fell to 6%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words browsers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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