In the past, people
ususally
did traditional Correct your spelling
usually
favorites
to relax themselves after a long time Use the right word
favourites
in
work, but nowadays they are trending to go out Change preposition
at
to
shopping . Change preposition
apply
In
Change preposition
This
this
essayLinking Words
,
Punctuation problem
apply
it
will show some benefits and drawbacks of shopping .
Going shopping usually leads to Correct pronoun usage
apply
pay
a large amount of money during Wrong verb form
paying
this
time . People Linking Words
is
easy to buy something when they hear the seller says good Correct subject-verb agreement
are
about
the products they like. Check wording
things about
For example
, Linking Words
consumer
do not plan to buy Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
Linking Words
this
clothes and they just like Fix the agreement mistake
these
this
form. Linking Words
Then
, the seller will say it is Linking Words
a
best seller or something Correct article usage
the
goods
about Fix the agreement mistake
good
this
and that attracted Linking Words
consumer
Correct article usage
the consumer
buy
Verb problem
to buy
that
.
Correct pronoun usage
it
However
, shopping activities bring many benefits to life and Linking Words
Correct article usage
the economic
economic
. Going shopping helps increase Replace the word
economy
high
standard Correct article usage
a high
life
. When they go shopping and buy products that they like , that make them happy and change Check wording
of living
our
quality Correct pronoun usage
their
life
. Change preposition
of life
For example
, buying a good bed after going shopping. They can have a good sleep at night after ending work. Linking Words
In addition
, Linking Words
this
activity helps Linking Words
develope
Correct your spelling
develop
Correct article usage
the economic
economic
in the country. The sellers can sell many Replace the word
economy
products
Punctuation problem
products,
lead
to Wrong verb form
leading
increase
Correct article usage
an increase
producing
in the market. Increasing Replace the word
in production
producing
can Replace the word
production
need
a Verb problem
require
big
number Correct word choice
large
employees
and reducing Change preposition
of employees
unemployees
.
In conclusion, shopping brings many benefits Use the right word
unemployment
but
it Punctuation problem
, but
also
creates some drawbacks. Linking Words
Therefore
, they should be regulated appropriately.Linking Words