These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In the past, people
ususally
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usually
did traditional
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to relax themselves after a long time
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work, but nowadays they are trending to go out
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apply
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shopping .
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it
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will show some benefits and drawbacks of shopping . Going shopping usually leads to
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a large amount of money during
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time . People
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easy to buy something when they hear the seller says good
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things about
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the products they like.
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,
consumer
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consumers
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do not plan to buy
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this
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clothes and they just like
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form.
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, the seller will say it is
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best seller or something
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about
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and that attracted
consumer
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the consumer
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buy
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to buy
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that
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it
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.
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, shopping activities bring many benefits to life and
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economic
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. Going shopping helps increase
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a high
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standard
life
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of living
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. When they go shopping and buy products that they like , that make them happy and change
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their
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quality
life
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of life
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.
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, buying a good bed after going shopping. They can have a good sleep at night after ending work.
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,
this
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activity helps
develope
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develop
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the economic
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economic
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in the country. The sellers can sell many
products
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products,
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lead
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to
increase
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an increase
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producing
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in the market. Increasing
producing
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can
need
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require
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a
big
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large
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number
employees
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of employees
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and reducing
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. In conclusion, shopping brings many benefits
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it
also
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creates some drawbacks.
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, they should be regulated appropriately.

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content
The task asks for online shopping. The essay talks about general shopping. Focus on online shopping and state clear good and bad points.
structure
Make a simple plan: a short intro, one paragraph for the good sides, one for the bad sides, and a short end.
examples
Give real facts for online shopping: price, delivery, return, safety, and time.
language
Use small, clear sentences. Check grammar like verb form and plural use. Use linking words to connect ideas.
structure
There is an effort to discuss shopping and a short ending.
content
The essay has some order and basic ideas.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Topic Vocabulary:
  • transnational problems
  • climate change
  • ozone layer depletion
  • pollution
  • collaborative efforts
  • pooling of resources
  • expertise
  • technology
  • innovative solutions
  • international standards
  • race to the bottom
  • environmental standards
  • capacity
  • impacts
  • national sovereignty
  • independently
  • economic
  • social contexts
  • international consensus
  • legal
  • political systems
  • enforcement
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