The bar chart demonstrated the population of
employee
in five different jobs in one area of Australia in 2001 and 2008.
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employees
Overall
, Linking Words
the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
people worked Change preposition
apply
as
sales in both Change preposition
in
of
2001 and 2008, and the least Change preposition
apply
of
workers were in Change preposition
apply
farming
industry in both Correct article usage
the farming
of
years. The employees Change preposition
apply
worked
in Correct pronoun usage
who worked
other
three industries were about the same Correct article usage
the other
number
with slight variation.
In detail, there were over 150 Use synonyms
thousand
employees who worked Use synonyms
as
sales in 2001 Change preposition
in
and
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, and
this
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number
increased to over 160 Use synonyms
thousand
in 2008. Use synonyms
Moreover
, 60 Linking Words
thousand
Use synonyms
of
people worked in Change preposition
apply
accounting
business in 2011, but the Correct article usage
the accounting
number
Use synonyms
droped
slightly in 2008. Correct your spelling
dropped
In addition
, there were approximately 50 Linking Words
thousand
Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
worker
in Fix the agreement mistake
workers
computing
industry in 2001, but the Correct article usage
the computing
number
grew to over 60 Use synonyms
thousand
after seven years. As the occupation of computing, the Use synonyms
employee
Check wording
apply
number
Use synonyms
were
about the same in nursing in 2001, and it had Correct subject-verb agreement
was
been
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apply
rosen
nearly 60 Correct your spelling
risen
thousand
in 2008. Only 20 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
worker
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workers
who
worked in farming in 2001, Correct pronoun usage
apply
while
the Linking Words
number
fell slightly in 2008.Use synonyms