The plans below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Beechwood
Farm
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, which was established in 1950, has undergone major changes over the years. In
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article, I would like to show the difference between the
Farm
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in the past and nowadays ,
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the size of the
field
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and the building facilities. Beechwood
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Farm
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, back in 1950, we can see that it contained a large
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area
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for sheep, which is quite a big space for raising animals, the barn takes huge space around there. Farmhouse was next , and
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the chicken cottage, which is behind the river. On the other side, the plant range, which only contains vegetables, soft fruit, and fruit trees, was obviously a large size that was empty and unexploited by the
field
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owners. Unlike nowadays,
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Farm
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has been developed and used wisely with new technology and better strategies for dividing and exploiting the land space.
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, the large sheep range in the past was transformed into a camping
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with more trees and tents, which is useful for the
field
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visitors, and it has been associated with a modern solar panel system , which covers almost all areas around the
farm
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.
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, there are two parking lots on both sides of the
Farm
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to contain all the cars for the visitors. From my perspective, the most useful addition to the estate was adding
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Farm
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shop, which ,
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the visitors
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opinion
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apply
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the most useful because it offers fresh foods coming directly and freshly from the
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.
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, in 2023, a small survey was conducted in the estate town, was resulted in 88% of people being satisfied with the development that happened on the grassland, and it made more people from other villages want to come and visit the
field
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or, interested in staying there.

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task response
Give a short start. Tell what the two times show in one line. Then group the points for old and new, with clear notes on each. Finish with a simple point on the overall view.
coherence and cohesion
Make a clear plan: intro, body with two parts, and a short conclusion. Put paragraphs for old and new, and use linking words like 'but', 'also', 'in addition', 'however'.
grammar and vocabulary
Watch for join words and wrong form. Use simple past for the old time and simple present for today.
data and examples
Give not too many small facts. Pick the main points and sizes or numbers if given, or say 'many' or 'some'.
tone
Avoid 'I' or 'my'. Use a formal tone.
content
The idea of comparing old and new farm features is clear.
content
Some examples are used, like a camping field and solar panel.
structure
There is a sense of purpose and plan in the writing.

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