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The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its service.

The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its service.
The two pie charts show how full-time and part-time
students
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 rated IT support and the opening hours of facilities.
Overall
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,
students
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 in both groups were very satisfied with the opening hours, but their opinions of IT support were quite different. Full-time
students
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 were generally happier,
while
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 part-time
students
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 reported more dissatisfaction. For IT support, more than half of full-time
students
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, at 54%, said they were very happy, and about one-third felt quite happy. Only 15% were not satisfied.
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, only 20% of part-time
students
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 felt very happy, and 35% felt quite happy. A much larger proportion, 45%, were dissatisfied with
this
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 service. As for opening hours, both groups gave positive feedback. Among full-time
students
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, 87% were very happy and 12% were quite happy, leaving just 1% dissatisfied. The figures for part-time
students
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 were
also
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 high, with 72% very happy, 23% quite happy, and 5% dissatisfied.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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