Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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are facing health problems

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their indulgence in

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medicine

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and treatments

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of leveraging modern

medicine

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development is controversial on whether it's a positive or negative, but in

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essay, I would argue that it is a symptom of a far worse underlying

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of

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in the medical institution. A

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appeared from two main causes

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the overworked medical

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and the

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of public

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. The first

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is the overworked medical

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. Doctors and nurses go

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many years of studying and practice before they can work at a hospital, and

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good because we can have a high level of quality medical

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working from day one,

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many

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from going

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the medical field. The medical field has high barriers of entry, which results in highly paid

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who are overworked and

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. A study from Harvard

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found that doctors and nurses are among the exhausted professions. The main result of

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issue

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is a medical

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who

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is not fully engaged with their patients, which

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the

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of

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that

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have toward the medical profession in general. The patients

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turn to

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medicine

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, where the practitioner is fully engaged and focused on their patient. The second

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is that many

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are not aware of the danger of

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medicine

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nor

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the full extent of modern

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. Schools and media are partly to blame

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. Schools ignore or do not do a good job of enhancing

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awareness

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in

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the dangers of

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medicine

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or the usefulness of modern

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. Traditional media try to focus on what grabs the attention of their viewer, and nothing is more boring than a lecture about the current status of modern

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. In general, the

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of

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makes

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lean into

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medicine

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. In conclusion, the increasing number of

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who have health issues and opt to use

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medicine

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instead

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of modern

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is a negative development. A negative development

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a result of a bigger

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of

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and

awareness

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in the medical field.