Due to many human activities animal's and plants' life is in danger. Some think that this cannot be changed. Some think that government should do something. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that each year the number of endangered species is rising

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human beings' activities. There

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remains a

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consensus

about whether it should be solved by

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the government

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or

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this

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if this

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issue cannot be solved at all.

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I intend to give a brief outline of the main points and arguments.

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with, some species have already become extinct

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poaching, pollution and deforestation.

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, the rainforest birds

dissapeared permanentely

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disappeared permanently

because of the widespread deforestation.

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, the climate change caused by

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events makes the situation even more difficult to change. It makes some members of society

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doubt the hope of positive changes in the

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future.

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, one of the main effective

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is probably the government activities.

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, setting up conservation centres, enforcing laws for hunting and raising

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awareness

of the issue can dramatically decrease the habitat loss. The people's

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involvement

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as essential as

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governmental

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they should support charities or

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not interfere in their habitat at least.

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proper actions and combined

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there is a realm of possibility that in the not-too-distant future, the biodiversity loss can slow down. All things considered, people are the main harm

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the ecosystem, but if they start to preserve the

endengered

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endangered

species, the problem will be solved.

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some damage is irreversible, it is essential for

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governments to take responsibility and act

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because protecting the environment is vital for future generations.