Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to seek your permission to give a presentation in our office. Our company

send

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sent

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me to Dubai

For attending

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to attend

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a conference where I got some valuable information related to my field.

This

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metting

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meeting

will cover some topics

including

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, including

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advancement in PHP and C++, advanced digital processing, and Python. It will

takes

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take

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one and

half

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a half

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hours only to explain my presentation. I think that anyone can participate in it because

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this

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these

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skills are important in many fields. The conference hall is the ideal place to conduct it

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there is enough space for seating. I am looking forward to your positive consideration. Yours faithfully, Rupinder Kaur.

rupindersamrow222

Sep 5, 2025

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task response

Make sure you answer all parts of the task: say what you want to do, what topics you will cover, how long it will take, who should attend, and where it will be held.

coherence and cohesion

Use clear paragraphs. Try to keep one idea per paragraph and link ideas with simple words like and, also, but.

content

The aim is clear at the start.

tone

The letter keeps a formal tone.

structure

The closing is polite.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

112 words

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Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantage and disadvantage of giving children this message.

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