The pie charts illustrates the number of sales in different spheres of online shopping in New Zealand during 10 years.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts illustrates the number of sales in different spheres of online shopping in New Zealand during 10 years.

THE GIVEN PIE CHARTS DEPICT

THAT

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THE

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BOUGHT ITEMS

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ITEMS BOUGHT

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ON ONLINE SHOPPING BY

THE

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apply

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PEOPLE IN NEW ZEALAND ACCORDING

THE

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TO THE

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SURVEY CONDUCTED

FORM

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FROM

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2003 TO 2013. FOR AN OVERVIEW, AT A GLANCE, IT IS TO BE NOTED THAT PEOPLE ARE

INTRESTED

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INTERESTED

IN BUYING TRAVEL GOODS

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apply

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ONLINE,

HOWEVER

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, THESE ITEMS, RATIO IS REDUCED IN

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THE NEXT

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YEARS.

TO BEGIN

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WITH, TRAVEL GOODS ARE THE MOST

SIGNIFICIENT

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SIGNIFICANT

ITEMS ORDERED IN 2003 WITH 36

PERCENT

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, BUT THE READINGS

GOT

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apply

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DECRESED

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DECREASED

IN THE NEXT

SUREVY

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SURVEY

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TO 7

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PERCENT

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ALTHOUGH

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FILIM

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FILM

/MUSIC SHOPPING DETAILS WERE 21

PERCENT

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IN THE YEAR 2003, WHERE THE READINGS GOT HIGHER

WITH

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33% AND

THIS

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SHOWS AN UPWARD TREND.

FURTHERMORE

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, THE

REAMINING

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REMAINING

GOODS SALES ARE NOT

INCREASE

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INCREASED

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ABOVE 30

PERCENT

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CONTRAST

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CONTRAST,

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BOOKS

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BOOK

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SALES ARE AT 19% IN 2003, THESE ARE

INCRESED

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INCREASED

TO 22

PERCENT

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IN 2013,

THIS

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LEAST

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THE LEAST

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ONE

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IN THE

CHARTS

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CHARTS.

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ALSO

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ALSO,

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GOT

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HAS

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RISE

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RISEN

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GRADUALLY IN

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THE NEXT

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YEARS.

nagendra

Sep 5, 2025

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

149 words

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The pie charts illustrates the number of sales in different spheres of online shopping in New Zealand during 10 years.

: Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered as 'role models' and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Is this a positive or negative development?