The table shows the percentage of people living in different types of dwellings in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the percentage of people living in different types of dwellings in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table shows the percentage of people living in different types of dwellings in three parts of Australia in 2001 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table
ilustrates
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illustrates
the proportion of
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population
living in various
type
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types
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houses
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of houses
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in three regions from
the
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apply
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2001 and 2006.
Overall
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, the highest
people
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was
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were
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living in the
houses
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across all the territories, the most in
the
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Tamania.
However
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, community living in the other habitats is the lowest,
while
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the
avarage
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average
people
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was
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were
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stying
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staying
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in the other
two
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types of dwellings.
Firstly
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, Tasmania had the most
public
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people
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staying in the
houses
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with 88 in 2001 and 89 in 2006, followed by Victoria 79,76 in 2001 and
2006
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2006,
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respectively.
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, The Northern Territory had the lowest percentage
people
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belongs to
houses
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with 65 in the start of the period and in the
end
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declined by
two
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per cent,
while
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other
two
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areas had slight increased in the
end
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of the period.
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,
people
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staying in the semi-attached house in
climbing
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increasing
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in all regions, but the least
people
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living in
this
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area are from Tasmania
with
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, with
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3 in 2001and 4 in 2006.
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, Tasmania
was
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declined for the
falt
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flat
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poppulation
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population
in
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at
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the
end
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of the period,
while
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other
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the other
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two
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region
was
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gained their flat habitats with 1 to 3 per cent. The Northern territory had the highest
people
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living in
the
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apply
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other types of homes
with
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, with
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14 and 11
in
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at
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start
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the start
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and
end
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,
while
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other
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the other
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two
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areas had below 2 per cent
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people
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of people
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living there.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words houses, people, two, end with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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