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The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.

The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.
The table gives information about how many full-time
students
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 coming from India studied in six British universities in two academic years (2020/21 and 2021/22)
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 well as the change in numbers and percentage
increase
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.
Overall
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, the greatest
increase
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 in Indian
students
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 could be seen in Sheffield
University
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,
while
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 BBP
University
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 showed the lowest
increase
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 over the two years. The
university
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 with the most
students
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 from India was BBP
University
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 in the first year and Coventry
University
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 in the second year. Sheffield
University
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 saw a dramatic rise of 187.7% in
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students
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reaching
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 2,345 in 2021/22.
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, the
number
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also
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 climbed considerably for Coventry
University
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 by 2,900
students
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 (121.3%) to hit 5,290
students
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 in 2021/22. Another significant
increase
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 was seen
in
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 Leicester
University
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 from 1,175 to 2,390
students
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, a rise of 103.4%. All other universities saw an
increase
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 of under 100% in the
number
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 of Indian
students
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from 2020/21 to 2021/22. The
number
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 of
students
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 going to
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University
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or
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 Greenwich and Anglia Ruskin
University
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 rose by 2,085
students
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 (84.9%) and 1,340 (69.6%) respectively. Regarding BBP
University
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, the
number
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 of
students
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 remained high in both years at 3,505 and 5,145, which was a growth of only 46.8%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, increase, university, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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