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Some people believe that developing good habits at an early age is the key to lifelong success. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many argue that an everyday routine is really important to achieve
successful
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a successful
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 life in the future, especially when you start to do it in your childhood. From my perspective,
tendency
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the tendency
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 to do something
everyday
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every day
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 from
young
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a young
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 age brings you to
good
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a good
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 quality
life
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of life
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 with less effort. A key factor contributing to
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 is that habits develop discipline. You don`t need to think about ordinary things anymore, so you can pay your attention to more important things.
This
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 can be explained by the fact that we spend less time on things that we do automatically. A clear example of
this
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 can be seen in
morning
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the morning
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 routine.
Everyday
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Every day
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 you
straggle
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struggle
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 from waking up, taking
shower
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a shower
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, eating breakfast
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, etc
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. In
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case
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 you waste your time fighting with yourself
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 of
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 everything reflexively and
give
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giving
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 yourself space for
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stuff
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 that will make your day better. Another factor that shows as importance of daily routine is that it helps you to be stable in
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different
 situations.
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 is largely
dou
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due
 to the fact that our brain loves stability. When you are upset or have no more energy, actions
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apply
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 that are common for you
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apply
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 guide your brain to
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a common
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 condition. Take,
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, the case of immigration. Everything is new
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:
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 people, streets, work,
language
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and language
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. Your brain is trying to get used to everything, but it`s really hard. But
daily
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a daily
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 cup of
coffe
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coffee
 with
cookie
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a cookie
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, dancing
with
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to
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your favorite
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favorite
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favourite
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 music, evenings reading and another small activity support you on the way
of
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to
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 well-being. In conclusion, I firmly believe that habits can make
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 life much more effective, stable and happier. It is
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 advisable for people to build their
lifes
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lives
 and
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the lifes
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lifes
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lives
 of their children with daily cyclican actions.

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content
You give your view but add more detail. Explain how daily habits can lead to success with more proof.
structure
Link ideas with clear words. Start each paragraph with a simple topic sentence and use linking words.
grammar
Fix basic spelling and grammar to make the meaning clear.
conclusion
End with a short line that repeats your view.
content
Your view is clear in this piece.
structure
Intro and conclusion are in place, and there are two body parts.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • early age
  • good habit
  • regular study
  • practice
  • reading
  • focus
  • time
  • plan
  • goal
  • learn
  • work
  • family
  • school
  • teacher
  • friend
  • luck
  • change
  • adapt
  • grow
  • try
  • fail
  • succeed
  • support
  • life
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