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Band 2

Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motoways and what solutions are there?

There is no doubt the fact that
motorways
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 help people travel quickly and cover long distances. Commonly held belief that
motorways
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 improve our
lifes
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lives
, there is
also
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 an argument that
this
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cause
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causes
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 problems.
This
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 essay will analyse
this
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 topic
for
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from
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 both points of view and express my opinion.  On one hand,
the
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apply
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life becomes better with
motorways
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.
In other words
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, it's
time saving
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,
they
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it
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shorten
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shortens
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 distances and allows people to reach their destinations faster.
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, the expressways are higher
efficiency
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efficient
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.
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, they make the transportation of goods and services much easier and quicker.
On the other hand
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,
motorways
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 produce problems. Despite safety measures, high speed increases the risk of severe accidents.
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, its reason
of
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for
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 environmental pollution. The more
car
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cars
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gases
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there are,
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 the more pollution. In
concultion
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conclusion
, there
is
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are
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 no easy answers for
this
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 question. On balance,
however
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, I believe that following the rules and
guidlines
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guidelines
 makes us benefit from using highways and reduces the risks

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language
Improve grammar and spelling to make ideas clear.
structure
Make a clear plan: intro, body with two sides, and a short conclusion.
coherence
Use connecting words to show how ideas link.
task response
State a clear view in the last paragraph and give reasons.
language
Use simple, correct words and avoid rare or wrong spellings.
content
The essay tries to show both sides of the topic.
position
It gives a final view.
content
It mentions speed and safety as issues.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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