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The pie charts below show the percentage of students at one adulteducation center taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year.

The pie charts below show the percentage of students at one adulteducation center taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year.
The pie charts compare the
students’
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proportion of several courses offered by
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 adult education
center
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 between 1985 and
this
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 year.
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,the modern languages,the art,the cookery and the
fitness
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 and
dance
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 are generally welcomed by the students over the forty-year period,
while
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 the music appreciation and the local history are replaced by the IT to meet the demand of the developing trend. In detail,it was clear that the modern languages
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 the most popular among students in 1985,it accounted for 24% of the total,followed by
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fitness
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 and
dance
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,with a comparable figure ,at 22%.The percentage of
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cookery(14%) and
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music appreciation(8%) together
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which
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 is equal to that of
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fitness
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 and
dance
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.
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 in terms of the art and the local history,the figures were similar ,at 17% and 15%,respectively. When it comes to
this
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 year,the percentage the IT represented experienced a dramatic growth from none to 27%,which ranks the highest among the courses listed.
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,the percentage of
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music appreciation and
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local history hit
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bottom and no one
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 them anymore. What’s more,the statistics of
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the art and the cookery
also
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 witness a slight increase ,to 17% and 19%,respectively,
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 the
fitness
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 and
dance
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 remained
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 at 22% during four decades.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fitness, dance with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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