You have been invited to a networking conference for your field of work. Write a letter to your immediate manager. In your letter: · Describe the invitation you received and why it is important to you · Explain why the conference would be beneficial for you and the company · Ask for the company for time off to attend and to cover some of the travel costs

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I have been invited to a networking conference

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on emergency management. The invitation that I

had

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received is related to emergency care and

CPR

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the CPR

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process.

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, the conference

take

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place on 16 September 2025 at Janakpuri, New Delhi. It will begin at 9am onwards and

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till 7pm. It is significant for me, as it allows me to apply my academic knowledge

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practical settings.

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meeting

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only

benefical

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beneficial

for me, but

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for

hospital

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. Expert trainers will

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various skills

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teamwork, problem-solving skills and procedures, which improve

critical

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thinking of staff members during critical situations. I am requesting you to please grant me leave from 15 September 2025 to 17 September 2025.

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, I would be grateful

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if you could arrange accommodation

facilties

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facilities

and travel costs. I truly hope you will look

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forward

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a positive response. Yours faithfully, Mansi Deswal

mansideswal28

Sep 8, 2025

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grammar

Fix spelling and grammar errors. For example, 'benefical' should be 'beneficial'.

structure

Make each paragraph hold one main idea. The first paragraph talks about the invite, the next about why it helps, and the last asks for time off and money.

tone

Keep a formal and polite tone. Use 'I would like to' or 'could I' to ask for time off.

content

Check the date, place, and times. Make sure they are clear and correct.

closing

Close with thanks and say you hope for a quick reply.

tone

The letter has a formal tone.

structure

The aim is stated at the start.

content

It asks for time off and travel costs.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

162 words

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