The pie charts illustrate meals of three kinds of nutrients -sodium, saturated fat, and added
suger
- , all being unhealthy if overconsumed Correct your spelling
sugar
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as
well as stating the average rate.
It clearly shows Punctuation problem
, as
the
amount of added sugar Correct word choice
that the
largely
is largely consumed as snacks, Rephrase
apply
while
being between 16% and 23% in other meals, making it unhealthy.
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Firstly
, during dinner Linking Words
sodium
is the most consumed mineral Punctuation problem
, sodium
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, being
being
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accounting
at
almost half of the daily sodium intake, Change preposition
for
while
breakfast and snacks are both Linking Words
on
14%. Change preposition
at
In addition
, dinner is yet again almost a third of the recommended saturated fat intake. Clearly, breakfast is the healthiest meal of the day since it Linking Words
stayed
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apply
consistantly
the lowest at almost a quarter of the daily needs.
Correct your spelling
consistently
Overall
, the charts show the need Linking Words
of cutting
back on added sugar throughout the meals since Change preposition
to cut
overconumtion
of any mineral is unhealthy. Correct your spelling
overconsumption
Therefore
, people must be mindful in picking what to eat Linking Words
as well as
keep track Linking Words
with
Change preposition
of
your
body's needs.Correct pronoun usage
their