Many cities have installed cameras in public places in order to reduce crime. However, some people think that those cameras restrict our privacy. Do you think the advantages of this system outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, as everybody knows, a lot of cities are getting, everyday, more dangerous, in

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, as you probably saw, there are a lot of teenagers, who, at night, arrives in the

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center and who start stealing, and, unlikely, they

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abuse of girls and women, in

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, nowadays a girl can not walk around the

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alone, especially at night. For those

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every man

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be available and kind and bring every girl back

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home

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if he can not, at least wait with her for a cab. Let's think about Milan, once it used to be way safer

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nowadays, everybody has to pay attention and

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be always aware of the

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that if you go around the

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with

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many jewels or with a nice

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someone will probably try to steal something from you. To solve those

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problems,

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there are

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in every angle of the

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way, whatever

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happens

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happens,

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the police will be able to catch the criminals and maybe

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discourage future criminals from stealing and

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abusing

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women. As you could probably detect from the first

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I'm in favour of

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it is full of people who think that

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reduce our privacy

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in

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detect us in every moment and

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every angle of the

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. To be honest, I do not care about my privacy, but I think that

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can reduce the amount of crimes

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is not the solution

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fact,

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problems

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should put more police around the

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and

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we should

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measures to prevent those crimes. In conclusion,

cameras

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are, for sure,

usefull

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useful

but they are not

enought

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enough

to prevent crimes.