The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar fromsugar cane.

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how to produce

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from

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cane, including seven manufacturing

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.

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, we can see there are seven

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,

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growing cane, harvesting, crushing, purifying

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, evaporating, centrifuging, dying and cooling. Notably, it is complex that the

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canes are converted into

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. At the beginning of the process, the

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canes spend twelve to eighteen months maturing. And

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after they have been ripe, farmers can harvest them by

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or machine

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is much more convenient to work. In the next stage, the

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canes are pressed into

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subsequently is

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transferred to a limestone filter for purifying.

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, the

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been purified is put in an evaporator. The

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is become

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syrup through heating, removing excess moisture.

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we are supposed to separate the

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crystal from

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by the centrifugal machine.

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, drying and cooling the

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crystal is the

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fabrication process.