The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a European country that had acces between 1999 and 2004.

The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a European country that had acces between 1999 and 2004.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a European country that had acces between 1999 and 2004.
The provided chart illustrates the proportion of modern and old houses in a European region that had access from 1999 to 2004.
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, both suburban and countryside households increased significantly over the entire period.
While
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the countryside had the least development during the years. In 1999, modern houses began with an insignificant minority, and
then
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experienced a dramatic rise in developing infrastructure , with just over half. Meanwhile, rural sites started with a small minority;
thereafter
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, they witnessed a slight surge , trying to improve as they can with almost 5% by 2000,
then
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reached a high point with just over 30%. A higher share of people who live in modern cities was in 2004, with just over 50%;
by contrast
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, the rural households had the least , with almost 30%.
While
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in 1999 the highest percentage was suburban
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approximately 10%,
on the other hand
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, rural sites had the lowest value ever , with a tiny fraction.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
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