The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
The line graph provides data on vehicle possession in Britain between 1971 and 2007.
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, it can be clearly seen that
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the highest level was no
car
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,
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however
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,
this
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figure experienced a steep decline over the years ,
while
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the lowest amount was three or more cars.
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with, no
car
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, in 1971, 49% of households which didn't have a
car
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used
car
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ownership,
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in 1983
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percentage decreased moderately to 40%. In 1995,
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amount was steeply reduced to 30%. And the percentage of
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trend experienced a slow decline to approximately 25% in 2000. In the
last
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decade (in 2007),
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figure went down to about 23%. In terms of people with one
car
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, begging of the year (in 1971)
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trend was 45% of ownership ,
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in 1975
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figure rose steadily to 47% and the remaining 6 years have hardly changed.
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, in 2007,
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trend stayed at 44%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "steep" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • household
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • increase
  • decrease
  • ownership
  • period
  • peak
  • dip
  • noteworthy
  • consistent
  • dramatic
  • highlight
  • significant
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