The line chart illustrates the
manufaction
(Correct your spelling
manufacturing
millions
) of three products in a garment company between 1990 and 2010.
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coat's
sales Check wording
coat
were
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was
gorwing
massively, and almost Correct your spelling
growing
have
the same rise in the whole period, Wrong verb form
had
besides
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the
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apply
others
goods had some fluctuations throughout the period.
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other
1990
the factory made 15 Punctuation problem
1990,
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millions
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million
of
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apply
suit
, and Fix the agreement mistake
suits
at
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in
the
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apply
1995
it had a tremendous increase to above 23 Punctuation problem
1995,
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millions
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million
the
growth is Punctuation problem
. The
significant
more than Replace the word
significantly
dress
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dresses
coat
, but it decreased sharply to around 17 Fix the agreement mistake
coats
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millions
after the next decade, and Fix the agreement mistake
million
have
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had
slightly
rise from 2005 to 2010. Dress sales Replace the word
slight
are
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apply
also
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grow
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grew
at
the first five years, from 1990 to 1995 and had a Change preposition
in
marginally
decline in the next five years, Replace the word
marginal
then
it steadily Linking Words
increase
to 15 Wrong verb form
increased
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millions
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million
at
2010.
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by
By contrast
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coat
had the fewest sales at the beginning Correct article usage
the coat
but
it had the most dramatic growth Punctuation problem
, but
than
the otherChange preposition
of
ones
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Moreover
it kept growing steadily in the period and Add a comma
Moreover,
finally
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become
the bestseller in 2005 with around 23 Wrong verb form
became
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millions
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million