The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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manufacturing

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millions

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) of three products in a garment company between 1990 and 2010.

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, the tendency of

coat's

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coat

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sales

were

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gorwing

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growing

massively, and almost

have

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the same rise in the whole period,

besides

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the

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others

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other

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goods had some fluctuations throughout the period. In

1990

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1990,

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the factory made 15

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millions

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of

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apply

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suit

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suits

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, and

at

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in

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the

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1995

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1995,

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it had a tremendous increase to above 23

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millions

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million

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the

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growth is

significant

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more than

dress

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dresses

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and

coat

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coats

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, but it decreased sharply to around 17

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millions

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million

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after the next decade, and

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a

slightly

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rise from 2005 to 2010. Dress sales

are

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apply

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also

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grow

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grew

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at

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in

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the first five years, from 1990 to 1995 and had a

marginally

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marginal

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decline in the next five years,

then

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it steadily

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increased

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to 15

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millions

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at

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2010.

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,

coat

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the coat

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had the fewest sales at the beginning

but

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it had the most dramatic growth

than

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the other

ones

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apply

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.

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Moreover

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it kept growing steadily in the period and

finally

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become

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the bestseller in 2005 with around 23

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millions

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million

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