The bar graphs below show the number of houses built in the UK between 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graphs below show the number of houses built in the UK between 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar graphs below show the number of houses built in the UK between 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of four different types of
house
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houses
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(
Terrace
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, Detached, Semi-detached and Flat) in the UK from 2010 to 2020.
Overall
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,
Terrace
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houses
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steadily increased and dropped during the period,
while
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flats increased sharply and became nearly as popular by the end.
In contrast
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, detached and semi-detached
houses
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showed a downward trend after 2014. At the beginning of the period,
terrace
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houses
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were built with around 2,600 units,
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then
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and then
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the detached
houses
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were about 1,700. Semi-detached
houses
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and flats were less common, with roughly 1,300 and 1,000 units respectively. From 2010 to 2016,
terrace
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houses
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rose slightly and reached a peak of around 2,800 in 2018 before dropping a little by 2020. Detached
houses
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grew moderately until 2014,
then
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steadily declined to about 1,400.
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, semi-detached
houses
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increased slightly until 2014 but
then
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fell to around 1,000 by 2018 and stayed stable.
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, flats showed a significant rise throughout the period. Their numbers grew from about 1,000 in 2010 to nearly 2,700 in 2020.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Vocabulary: Replace the words terrace, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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