The table and pie charts present data about the police
budget
from 2017 and 2018 in an area of Britain.Use synonyms
While
Linking Words
,
the table depicts where the cash came from and the charts demonstrate how it was separated.
In general, there Punctuation problem
apply
was
a number of alterations that Correct subject-verb agreement
were
it
affected Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
the Change preposition
apply
budget
. Use synonyms
For instance
, the total sum of police Linking Words
budget
increased slightly in order to the Use synonyms
growth
drammatically of local taxes. Correct word choice
dramatic growth
On the contrary
, Linking Words
salaries
of the officers and staff were dropped sharply. Correct article usage
the salaries
In addition
, the police Linking Words
budget
Use synonyms
expressed
in pounds.
Observing the table in detail, Verb problem
is expressed
national
government indicated Correct article usage
the national
in
175.5m in 2017,Change preposition
apply
by
Correct word choice
and by
2018
Punctuation problem
2018,
this
source extended to 177.8m. Linking Words
Then
, other resources showed in 38m. Linking Words
However
, in 2018 these resources grew Linking Words
merely
Rephrase
apply
only to
0.5m Correct word order
to only
Punctuation problem
, that
that
was 38.5m. Correct pronoun usage
which
Moreover
, local taxes developed markedly from 91.2m to 102.3m in 2018. Ultimately, Linking Words
total
Correct article usage
the total
budget
ascended substantially to 13.9m in 2018.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in 2017 salaries of officers and staff represented Linking Words
enormous
proportion that was 75%. By 2018, the money was Correct article usage
an enormous
allocate
less at 69% to these salaries. Wrong verb form
allocated
Additionally
, technology remained unchanged at 17% in a year. Linking Words
Also
, buildings and transport increased to 6% from 8% to 14% in 2018.Linking Words